======Choker and Bass======
The air conditioner hums in the train car; beyond the gss, a dark strip of sea. They take up half the bench. Half the bench, really. Sophie, in her bck top and slit skirt, sits sideways: thin straps biting at her colrbones, the choker snug on her neck. The hem creeps up her thigh at every curve.
People look—not brazenly, but you feel it: two guys across the aisle, tourists with Estrel bottles; an older woman smiling at Laya, warm as somebody’s aunt.
— Rules for the night, — Sophie says. — Consent and pace. Two-drink limit. Photos—only with permission.
— Adding: to the bar in pairs, back together, — Evan says, seconding her.
— And: if the music doesn’t work, we just leave, — Matteo adds, already typing.
— Oh! Mine’s techno. — Laya ughs, leaning closer. Under the fabric of her top, the hard line of the bar shows for a second; Sophie catches the hint, and heat gathers under her skin.
Across the aisle, the guys trade phrases in Spanish. Riccardo stands, softly blocking the sightlines—as if he’s just reaching for the door. Davide sets his backpack on the floor by Sophie’s feet.
— Tranqui, — he says quietly.
— I’m calm. — Sophie pauses, then adds honestly: — But I like that they’re looking. As long as it stays within bounds.
The train slows at a floodlit ptform. A fine vibration runs through the windows.
— On the dance floor: two tracks together, one solo, — Sophie rattles it off.
— Deal. — Voices in chorus.
Laya touches her elbow—brief, a signal. Sophie feels the night swing open—like the train door at ptform level.
Bass sits in the sand. String lights catch on wet shoulders. A crush at the bar; the smell of lime and sugar, rum underneath.
They go random on purpose: the bartender rolls a die; whatever comes up, they drink.
— No shots, — Matteo says immediately.
— One shot is like a goodnight kiss, — Riccardo drawls.
— The deal was cocktails, — Sophie says, even. — And water.
The die ctters on the counter—nds on two. The bartender sets a squat gss packed with crushed ice in front of her.
— Mai Tai, — he says. — Two rums, lime, orange liqueur, almond syrup.
Sophie lifts the gss. It smells of almond and citrus. The sweetness hits first. The alcohol sits underneath it, like a warm current under skin. She drinks slowly; with each sip, calm warmth spreads through her body, and her muscles let go. Way too easy. Too easy… Half the gss is already gone.
Laya gets a Margarita, licks the salt from the rim; under her top, that hard line of metal shows again. Evan pours water into his palm and flicks it at her—she snorts. Davide and Matteo argue about music—techno versus disco—but settle on some remix. Riccardo’s almost won their bet, but catching Sophie’s gaze, he pushes the shot of tequi aside:
— Fine. Rules are rules.
The crowd on the dance floor sways. It smells of sunscreen and co. Skin, everywhere, all at once. Sophie’s skirt has ridden higher, the choker snug around her neck, the straps vibrating with the bass. She catches their gazes—hers included—and doesn’t look away: takes another small sip and smiles, because the taste is still fruity, not yet sharp.
— Onto the floor for one track, — Laya breathes it directly into her ear.
— One track. — Sophie nods, and the music seems to offer them its hand.
==========Scent of Lime==========
The dance floor surges with bass. It tightens, then lets go. Light slices through the crowd, picking out backs, shoulders, hands. Laya slips into the flow easily—catching gnces, letting them pass. Space opens in front of her. Sophie stays close; the bass taps her choker, and her pulse keeps time. Two quick gulps of water—then back into the rhythm.
Someone passes too close; an elbow grazes her side, and a stranger’s palm settles on her hip.
— No. Not like that. — Sophie says it ft. She catches the wrist and releases it. No extra movement.
— Tranqui, bai, — the guy grins, then melts back into the crowd. Davide shifts left, unnoticed, covering her side. Riccardo drifts right, like he’s just looking for a better angle.
Her skirt twists on a sharp turn, the slit opening higher on her thigh than she meant. The hem of her top slips, baring a thin strip of skin under her chest. She feels the air hit it and doesn’t break rhythm.
— Breathe in time, — Laya whispers into her ear.
— Yeah, Sophie answers, and for a moment their shoulders touch. A spark.
By the next track, two guys fall into step with them.
— Guapas, ?cervezas?
— Luego. — Sophie smiles, but her gaze sets a clean boundary. Evan is already there with a cold Font Vel bottle, like he’s been waiting.
— All good? — he asks, half over his shoulder.
— Good. — A beat. — Still good.
Bass rolls through their ribs like a wave. Laya redirects a hand from her lower back, turning the push into part of the dance. Sophie copies the move. The floor finally gives them room. A gnce stays a game; touch starts only where they allow it.
The bar is a crush. Heat sits under the string lights. The air smells of lime and sugar, rum underneath. The die sps the counter again—nds on six. The bartender winks.
— Zombie. Three rums, passion fruit, lime. Float of 151 on top.
— Sounds lethal, — Sophie ughs, voice rough, and takes the gss in both hands.
Ice crunches. Sweetness hits first. Rum hides under it, warm and quick. She takes two long swallows and ughs again, wiping the corner of her mouth with her thumb. Heat creeps up toward her throat; the choker presses lightly. Her nipples tighten under the fabric. Easier to breathe now. Keep it inside the lines… Half the gss is already gone.
— Rules are rules, — Evan reminds her, offering water. — Where’s Riccardo?
— Lost him. — Davide’s gaze sweeps the crowd. — Meet at the showers after a track, — he says, and he’s gone.
They stay at the bar for the next song. Sophie leans closer to Evan to be heard. She smells lime and her own skin. Her thigh brushes his, like it’s searching for an anchor.
— I like when people look at me, — she says quietly, almost swallowed by the noise. — I don’t like when they decide for me.
— Noted. — He smiles, dry. — Honestly, after the breakup I buried myself in maps and lists. Easier to stay inside the lines that way.
— Harder to just be yourself?
— Yeah. — He swallows. — But with you... easier.
Sophie catches him looking at her colrbone and doesn’t shift—lets him look. She reaches for the water; a cold drop runs down her neck. She feels control tilt: not colpse, just soften.
— One slow track, — she offers. — No rules. Just for us.
==========Solo uno==========
The DJ cuts the bass and floods the beach with a slow track. The crowd parts on cue; people get pulled into new circles, and Sophie lets herself drift deeper. Hands catch her by the forearms, guiding her into rhythm. She smells salt. She smells the sweet aftertaste of the Zombie. Heat clings to her skin. She ughs, and the world swims at the edges.
— ?Baimos?
— Baimos… lento, — she ughs. Words stick; her tongue goes clumsy.
A palm tries for her hip.
— Aquí. — Sophie guides it away—to her wrist. — Solo aquí.
— Vale.
Warm breath touches the back of her neck. She feels the music on her skin—along her spine, under the choker, in the hollow of her colrbone. Alcohol has smoothed the edges, leaving mostly rhythm.
Her skirt brushes someone’s thigh; she ughs and, for a second, loses herself in unfamiliar hands, but holds the rule. Hands only here. Hands only here. The stranger complies; their fingers lock like a csp.
At the edge of the circle, Evan pops into view: he rises on his toes, searching for her, catches the glint of her choker, the line of her throat—and freezes. Laya is already pushing closer; her hand touches Sophie’s shoulder for a moment.
— Todo bien, — Sophie smiles at them both, barely hearing herself.
Then she sinks back into the dance. Strange hands repeat only what she’s allowed.
Sophie remembers the shower meet-up and, ughing, surfaces from the crowd. Her “bodyguards” have disappeared behind a wall of backs; the lights mess with her sense of direction. At the bar she catches two locals:
— ?Ducha… por ahí?
— Cro. — The guy nods toward a sign and winks. — Primero, un tequi.
They salt the back of her hand, press a lime wedge into her fingers. The rim taps her teeth. Fire in her throat. Salt on her tongue. Her fingers find her choker; the hem of her skirt catches someone’s leg, and that only makes her ugh. A shot is against the rules; the thought flickers somewhere inside, and still the night stays light—like a carnival ride, every wrong turn just another spin.
— ?Otra! — she jokes, and bursts out ughing at herself.
— No, no. — A girl shakes her head, offers water. — Solo uno. Ducha… allí.
She points toward a dark passage. Sophie thanks her, air-kisses near her cheeks, takes a few steps—and notices the music is muffled here. The sand feels deeper. Almost no one around.
The “DUCHAS” sign hangs farther to the left; she almost believes it. Not lost yet...
— ?Oye! — someone calls after her. She waves.
— All good, aventura.
Her bag slides against her hip. The strap of her top digs into her shoulder. Her skin is damp from the sea wind. She likes the way they look at her: not pushy—curious, and she can live with curious.
— Ducha… — she asks a passerby.
— Sí, sí… por aquí, — he ughs, and gestures somewhere to the right.
— Vale. — Sophie smiles.
Nothing is really wrong. The night is a ride. Shower—meet—water, she reminds herself, and keeps going across the warm sand.