Trace woke in the narrow bed of his trailer to the rattle of rain against the thin aluminum walls.
Kentucky weather could have four seasons in a single day, and this one had started wet.
He groaned, rolled onto his back, and stretched long. Even at six foot one, the narrow cot made him feel cramped. Two hundred pounds of hard-earned muscle could not lift the weight of a hangover pressing down on him. Behind his eyes, his head throbbed, and last night’s bourbon still left its sour bite on his tongue.
Muscle memory kicked in as joints cracked and shoulders rolled, working out the stiffness. But his mind moved like boots through mud.
The trailer reeked of stale alcohol, old coffee grounds, and damp air. Clutter had claimed every surface. Yesterday’s flannel still draped over the couch. A sink full of dishes sat waiting for attention. The TV remote remained permanently duct-taped in place. By the door sat a pair of Salomon boots, worn smooth but spotless. They were the only thing he still took care of.
Above the coffee maker hung a faded photograph of his old unit. Six Rangers with arms hooked together, all wearing the standard military grin for the camera. Trace stood in the middle, younger and sharper in his crisp gear.
He turned away.
Coffee first. Always coffee.
He shuffled to the counter, poured it black, and let the steam rise into his face. The first swallow was bitter and scalding, his stomach threatening revolt. He took another anyway. Sometimes it was not about feeling better, only pushing through.
By the time the second cup was gone, the fog in his skull had thinned enough to move.
He stepped into the narrow bathroom and leaned toward the cracked mirror above the sink.
A face looked back at him that felt older than thirty. Stubble shadowed his square jaw, and pale gray eyes carried more weight than they should. The hangover had carved shadows beneath them, but his build remained solid. Broad shoulders and thick arms showed the muscle still packed across his frame. A body made for work and fighting, even if the years had worn the man thin.
His dark hair was cropped close, the kind of military cut that never left him. Habit more than pride. It made the reflection look like a soldier, even if he had not been one in years.
The kind of face that used to draw second looks when he bothered to clean up. Now he just saw a man coming apart at the seams, worn down by choices that felt easier than sleep.
The chain of his dog tags caught the weak light as he rubbed a hand across his face. Habit made him wear them even here. Nobody cared about his name anymore, but he still carried it.
“Still breathing,” he said to his reflection. “Guess that counts.”
He pulled on a clean-enough flannel from the hook by the door, laced up the Salomon boots, and stepped outside.
Payday.
The rain had eased to a drizzle. Puddles rippled across the soggy gravel drive under the gray sky. His old Ford sat waiting, beat up but reliable. The engine still turned over on the first try. That was all that mattered.
Steam curled from the black coffee in his battered stainless travel mug. He never left home without it.
The truck coughed to life, wipers squealing across the glass as he set the mug in the holder. Country radio fuzzed in and out through a cracked speaker, the same station he always tuned to out of habit.
He drove with the window cracked, letting the outside air push away the remnants of his mistakes. One hand on the wheel, the other wrapped around the coffee, he let the road hum beneath the tires. Payday Friday. Get the check and perhaps groceries, but definitely bourbon.
By the time he reached the construction yard, the mug was empty.
The chain-link fence sagged in spots. The prefab office trailer leaned tiredly at the edge. He parked, killed the engine, and stepped out. Diesel fumes and sawdust hung thick in the damp air.
Inside, the office was warm and stale, cluttered with paperwork no one cared about. The foreman barely looked up from his clipboard.
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“Trace. Good push on that last job. Wrapped early. Management’s cutting bonus checks. Good timing for a Friday, huh?”
Trace grunted, took the envelope, and slid it into his back pocket. He crossed the room, popped the lid on his travel mug, and poured from the office pot without asking. Burned and bitter, but it would do.
The foreman tapped his pen. “I’ll give you this. You drive a crew harder than anyone I’ve got. Got three guys asking to transfer to whatever job you’re on next. That’s not something I see much.”
Trace topped off his mug, letting the words hang. Praise was something he never knew how to hold.
Across the room, a couple younger guys swapped weekend plans. One mentioned his kid’s Little League game. Another talked about a lake trip. Someone else complained about a barbecue with the in-laws. Laughing, easy conversation.
One of them looked over. “So what’s the big man doing this weekend? Got yourself a lady lined up?”
The room chuckled.
Trace snapped the lid on his mug. “Got a date with bourbon and bad television. Cheaper, and less likely to yell at me in the morning.”
Laughter rolled sharper this time, but he did not care. He took a long sip, letting the scald burn back through the hangover.
The foreman waved him off. “Go on, Trace. You’ve earned it. Try not to drink yourself broke.”
He spent the afternoon the way he spent most of them when there was no work. Running errands he did not really need. Groceries that would sit untouched. Gas station coffee that tasted worse than home. A stop at the hardware store for nothing in particular.
The hours bled together until the sun dipped low and the pull of bourbon grew louder than anything else.
Maggie’s sat on the edge of town, a squat brick building with rain-slick neon painting red across the pavement. The parking lot was full. Payday Friday. Every roughneck in the county wanted a drink.
A narrow alley cut down one side of the building, dumpsters against the brick, red neon bleeding across wet asphalt.
Trace pushed through the door. The thrum of voices and the twang of the jukebox washed over him. He shook the rain from his shoulders and slid onto his usual stool.
Maggie glanced up. Mid-forties, sharp eyes, hair pulled back, the kind of woman who had seen every kind of drunk come through her doors.
“The usual, Trace? Tall beer and the cheap stuff?”
He slid the paycheck envelope onto the bar. “Not tonight. Got a bonus. Upgrade me.”
She raised a brow. “An upgrade? Well, that’s new.” She reached to the top shelf and pulled down a bottle of Buffalo Trace. Dust clung to the glass. “Don’t say I never spoiled you.”
Trace twisted off the cap, poured a heavy measure, and took a slow sip. Maggie slid a tall beer beside it.
“Chaser,” she said. “Even big men need one.”
He nodded and chased the bourbon with the beer.
Maggie leaned on the counter. “One of these days you could surprise me. Maybe walk in with someone instead of a paycheck and a thirst.”
Trace gave her a faint smirk. “I’m saving myself for you, Maggie.”
She snorted, rolling her eyes. “You keep telling yourself that. And try not to start any trouble tonight.”
The bar buzzed. Pool balls cracked. The jukebox wailed. Conversations tangled together in the humid air.
Trace sat in the middle of it, alone in a crowded room. His eyes flicked to the mirror behind the bar, catching the door in its reflection. Old instincts. He was drinking, but he was watching too.
Hours slipped by. The jukebox looped. Wallets thinned. The bourbon bottle sat more than halfway empty.
That was when trouble shouldered its way in.
Two drunk men shoved through the crowd, brittle laughter riding their steps. They stopped at Trace’s stool.
“Look at this guy,” the first said. “Sitting here like he owns the place.”
Trace ignored him.
The second leaned close, breath sour. “Hey. You deaf?” His finger jabbed Trace’s shoulder.
Trace poured, drank, and set the glass down.
The shove hit him hard from behind.
Trace rose slowly. The bar stool scraped across the floor.
The first man swung wide and sloppy. Trace caught the wrist, turned, and dumped him on the floor. The second lunged. Trace stepped in, drove a shoulder into his chest, and swept his legs. The man crashed through a table as wood splintered.
It was over in seconds.
The jukebox played on. Conversations died. Chairs scraped as the crowd pulled back.
Then Maggie’s voice cut through the silence.
“Trace. Out. Now.”
He turned, bottle still in hand. “They started it.”
“And you finished it.” She stepped around the bar, voice low and sharp. “You know my rules. No fights in my bar. Not from anyone. Especially not you.”
Trace held her eyes for a long moment, then turned toward the door.
Rain tapped against the dumpsters as the door swung shut behind him.
He walked toward his truck, then stopped. Too many beers. Too much bourbon. Even broken, this Ranger was not stupid.
He moved down the alley, boots splashing through shallow puddles, and slid down against the cold brick. He twisted the bottle open again and drank. The drizzle plastered his hair to his head, cool against bourbon heat.
For a moment, with Kentucky rain on his skin and bourbon in his gut, it almost balanced out.
The town carried on. Tires hissed. A distant siren wailed. Laughter leaked from Maggie’s walls.
Trace rested the bottle against his knee. The bourbon had joined his boots and dog tags as something he could not let go of.
He raised the bottle one last time, drank deep, and closed his eyes.
Darkness came, and he let it take him.
The neon sign above flickered and went black. The puddle at his boots shivered. Light traced through the water in curling lines, growing brighter until it formed symbols he did not know.
The air thickened. His dog tags lifted from his chest, pulled by a current that was not there. The glow climbed the brick wall and etched the alley in a cage of burning lines.
His grip on the bottle stayed locked.
And then he was gone.